I got the advice to really focus on negative space and I think it helped. I do think I over simplified the hair and scarf but I'm okay with it. Part of art is experimenting and learning by doing so.
I'm still not convinced that not doing the wrinkles/folds around the eye is a good idea. Buuut we'll see. At this point it's about learning.
Also the lips were weirdly hard on this one.