Hey Steemers!
I'm a professional singer/songwriter. You can check out my originals and covers at my website.
I've got a new song. It's fast and fun!
I'm gonna put the lyrics here and sing it for you.
Then I need your help to write the verses! I've got some ideas, but I need more.
I'm looking for metaphors and twists of phrases to do with rain, breaking up, and happiness over both those things. You'll get the idea from the chorus, but specifically, here are some lines I'm playing with.
"You used to be my sunshine but now..."
"A little rain never hurt no one"
"The sun peeks out from behind the clouds"
And so on...
So, fill those comments with your suggestions and ideas! I'll share the finished song with all of you and then I plan to pitch it to a major artist.
Let me know what you think!
Lyrics:
Raindrops
Falling on my head
Downpour
I'm getting all wet
Recall
The words that you said
Told me bye and don't ask why
And I should be sad
But, baby I'm not
Treated me bad
And now I can't stop
Dancing to
The sound of the raindrops
While I wait for the rainbow