Yo man, this is really well written, there is clarity in your words. We are the change, if we could stop worrying about the rest of the world and get our own house in order we can create massive change in the world, we can shine the light affecting everyone and everything we come in contact with. Fantastic stuff, I will be reading more from you.

One piece of advice, throw some spacing in to break up the word dump and give each statement more oomph. The words are powerful on their own when reading but some people might be overwhelmed by the paragraph sizing.