Hive account@ddatica, I like the way you have written this. I like the rawness of it. It fits with the topic. It's quite a task to write poetry in a language that is not your first or primary language. You have done a beautiful job with the rhythm and cadence of this poem. Your mastery of proper punctuation is commendable!

You have a couple of spelling errors which you might like to edit and correct:

windful

• wind-full

alphabeth

• alphabet

Thanks for being a member of my Discord Server. I'm following you now.

I've upvoted and resteemed this article as one of my daily post promotions for the Hive account@mitneb Curation Trail Project. It will be featured in the Hive account@mitneb Curation Trail Project Daily Report for 02 MAR 2018.

Cheers!