An artist made this digital painting, then asked me for a paintover (in a public forum many years ago).
I did this, he said it helped. Let me know if you want one too, I will do my best to try to give some useful feedback. :)
This one shows several common beginner's mistakes:
too much contrast in the deep background,
too much freehand airbrush,
too much saturation,
and, if it's supposed to be the same light (sunlight) shining on both the man and the moons, it's inconsistent.
This was originally posted on CGTalk.com in this thread Paint-Over Please! (POP):
http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?f=166&t=359226&page=1
My other paintovers:
https://steemit.com/art/@stahlberg/an-artist-asked-for-feedback-i-made-a-gif
https://steemit.com/art/@stahlberg/animated-paintover
https://steemit.com/art/@stahlberg/2ht6cw-animated-paintover
I do self-upvote, but I wait so I'm not the first. I don't buy votes. Thanks for watching!