- Deep Blue Soul -
Original poem by
Mr. Spacely
You have always been forever
shared the joy with us
Through sad days, carried by the wind
we went together
On your wave, I raise my sails
and I see myself,
I'm forever yours
My cradle, a wooden spoon
seems like it's hovering,
dreaming,
floating,
in a plate of the vastness of your spirit
Take me now, now I'm yours
the land is not home of mine anymore
through my body, the strange currents flow
like we are One,
Like two souls
And while I sink, I have no fear
My sense awakens...
- Plavetnilo duboke duše -
Original poem by
Mr. Spacely
Zauvijek si vječno bilo,
radovalo se sa nama
Tužne dane, vjetrom nošem
prolazili skupa
Valom tvojim, dižem jedra
vidim i sam,
zauvijek plovim
Kolijevka moja, drvena žlica
kao da lebdi,
sniva,
pluta,
u pjatu prostranstva duha tvoga
Uzmi me sada, sada sam tvoj
Kopno više nije moj dom
sada tijelom mojim plove čudne struje
kao da smo jedno,
kao dvije duše
I dok tonem, nemam straha
osjet mi se budi...
Original Poetry and Art
by
Mr. Spacely
This time I wrote my poem in the Croatian language and then tried to translate it in English.
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