I really liked this story, ! I almost lost my breath in the chase. I can understand the people in the neighborhood, but not the behavior of the aunt. How miserable and without feeling, I hate it! I liked the structure you used in this story: start with the end, go to the past and return to the present. Also that the aunt's character would have died! Thank you for writing interesting stories and
for sharing.
RE: ADSactly Short Story - Racing for Life