I like this.

Legit feedback; (that I really pray to god doesn't sound like I am coming off as a prick... because again I like this image.)

Here goes -- Her eyes could be spaced just slightly differently as they look just slightly cross eyed so close to the nose like that. I would go and find someone in that direct pose and notice the sections of the body that are slightly relaxed to the model, as she seems very rigid. Her skirt fold has some unfortunate placing. Breasts are nice but I feel a little too girthy for the frame but that is just taste preference there.

It has a lot going for it but I think there are somethings that could be adjusted... just a little.

THANK YOU for your hard work and for sharing your work with us. I know it is hard to put yourself out there.