What do you mean 90s comic look over-accessorising will always be how you make characters look that little bit cooler and edgier XD

I always loved pets/familiars in games, there should always be loot monkeys xD

As for the trolls well I think you just about have the teeth down O_O lol XD

I guess you could do either of those things to clean up the lineart but honestly it looks interesting as is.