The blogger Hive account@acinad and her blog about Kutie Kuts Kiddie Salon was a brief essay on what they have experienced in visiting a kiddie salon. She elaborated what you need to know about th the Kutie Kuts Kiddie Salon which is located on the 2nd floor Robinsons Place Antipolo. We acknowledged the effort pf the author for sharing with us her child's pampering experience.

Starting off with the blog, it was good to read using that format. Spacing was okay and it was easy to comprehend, but it was not that so inviting for the readers because it was started with narrating what they will be doing on that day. The blogger may try to expand more of introducing the benefits of going to the salon justifying the advantages and disadvantages.

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FORMAT

Format wise it is simply justified that consists of two to three sentences per paragraph that looks like a traditional style blog format. You may likewise bold the salon name for a better name retention because the salon name was too long and in bolding a proper noun will give an emphasis that what you are talking about the blog is all about that salon.

Although it is a bonus point that it seems that the blogger was satisfied and sure of with the beginning of the paragraph that they are one of the satisfied customers.

Format rating: 86%

CONTENT

Some of the important information on the kiddie salon that the blogger need to know was detailed on her blog which the readers were looking for. It was quite a big help for the avid readers to know the prices of each services they offer to their customers, and also the unique ideas they could offer to their kids customers which will also reflects to their parents assurance that their kids will be safe, treated humanly with care and feeling comfortable while doing their hair cut.

One good point is showing the peso value to international currency (US $) for some foreign readers but still USD exchange rates may vary and it might cause a second thought for their foreign customers, it may also cause commotions once they visited the area. Always advise on your post with prices involved to open and close parenthesis the phrase prices may vary.

On the other hand, it was an effective advertisement for the kiddie salon. It was specified some of the activities they could offer with their customers. Evidence that they let the kids watch something while doing their hair cut. The author forgot to share if they have other choices aside from this activity because there are some kids who doesn’t want to watch. Nonetheless, if it is the only activity they can offer during the kids hair cut. Ask if they have some movie choices and be aware because there are some who were distracted while watching.

Imagine kids with this age range being so playful and feel discomfort when having their hair cut. It was a stressful part for parents to supervise their kids to behave well.

Good point is that she provided other branches for the kiddie salon and it was a superb information for the avid readers to know the nearest Kutie Kuts Kiddie Salon branch. With the blog content, although it was informative still needed more convincing words so that the readers will be excited to know more.

Content rating: 85%

PHOTOS

The blogger showed some picture details and it was clear enough that you really went there, enjoyed and tried their services. Next time, provide more active pictures that would encourage the readers to visit the kiddie salon, to make it more convincing and powerful. Also, having pictures with the kids showing happy faces showed the readers that they have fun and they were comfortable and relaxed until their hair gets done. The picture of before and after haircut will also provide comparison on how clean and stylish will the customer look after availing the said service.

Pictures: 84%

Bloggers critic always needed an improvement for better and quality blog. All in all, it was a good catch up blog on advertising this kiddie salon. Kuddos to you Hive account@acinad! Keep it up!

"Nothing ever becomes real till it is experienced"
~ John Keats

I hope you had a wonderful day. We decided last Sunday to cut the hair of my daughter. This is her first time in kiddie salon, because we usually cut her hair only by us. We know that there is a kiddie salon in Robinson Antipolo. It is Kutie Kuts Kids Salon.

They have car seat where the kid can sit while having their haircut. A television where the kids can watch to entertain them while having their hair done. You can choose which one to watch for your baby whether they like Mickey Mouse Club House, Barbie, Frozen, and a lot more to choose from. The crew are kind and helps you entertain your child while cutting the hair.