Hi Hive account@cheetah, could you please re-examine your vote here? I simply split one post into two. I thought they worked better that way. First, I edited https://steemit.com/fiction/@leftyobradovich/3ogf3h-the-dirtbag-vernacular-original-novel, then updated. Then took what I had deleted and made a new post here: https://steemit.com/fiction/@leftyobradovich/4irz71-the-dirtbag-vernacular-original-novel