I just think the song is beautiful, and it's lovely that you have a repetitive chorus, because I think that's how people learn the song, and you can sing along. I find myself singing along with your songs. And if I can't dance now, I have danced before, and I will dance again.
So I just wrote this poem yesterday. I'm writing a series called King and Lionheart, and this is the fourth poem in the series. The new, well, I'll just read it.
It's called King Zephyr of the Tide. I wrote it yesterday. Like an unexpected zephyr, rising oceanic tide, entering the world I'm in, I want to take the ride.
Softly discreet, a secret caress, which suddenly only I know about, arrives. His eyes, enchanting, magic dances, beaming from his sensuous face. Starlit from the heavens, incredible lights of fire have ignited a secret desire.
Hidden in this nakedness, Lionheart refrains. Fortis swaddled in unknowing, wonderment and mystic knowledge, showering me from Earth's truest love. Showering him with kisses, near misses and moonbeams from above.
I drift in and out of my own mind's eye. Tell me, feel me, reveal this enchanted love. Heal me, steal me from all those I used to know.