Thanks for the notes Hive account@jamielefay, and kind words! I can clean up the Hu'urei. Costume change isn't a biggie either. The lip looks fuller in this because she's suppose to be dragging it down with the lick [...that'll be coming after the inking]. Also, there's going to be a lot of blood around her mouth [...considering doing the stripes across the face. Do you think that'll be too much?].

I'll make changes during the inking process. Thanks again for the opportunity!