Hi 
You said,"let me know what you think about this article and what I can do to improve in this area! " Cool, I'm happy to help
- More pics - I'm sure you've got loads
- Use the editor for bold text, headlines etc.
- Learn about tags and which ones to use for each post to maximise views
- Write about what you love - don't pander to the whims of others' - just my opinion though.
- Have fun - even if your posts don't make mega $ - keep posting and 'let go' of the rewards, kind of :/
- Make valuable comments and choose your upvotes wisely
- Check this - so much awesomeness here http://steemtools.com/
- Join the minnow support project on discord.
- Have fun
- Have more fun!
p.s there's heaps of other tips not covered here in my comment, but I hope this helps in getting the ball rolling.
Oh - one last thing - write up a proper introduce yourself post with the first hashtag as #introduceyourself - check the feed to get an idea of which ones do well.
Hope this helps
RE: Curacao, a hidden treasure in the caribbean.