This article is full of wisdom, and great advice for living, Hive account@mzeechase! I agree with the advice Hive account@samstikkz has given you. I would add that before selecting tags, look on the list of tags by clicking on the "explore" link in the Steemit menu, and try to use those tags if possible. The first tag you list should be the one most relevant to your topic. Practice using Markdown to format nicely. The link for the instructions is right above the post preview box. Experiment and learn!
Even without any improvements your article is definitely worth my upvote and resteem. Great job! Cheers!