I upvoted your post because it's obvious that you put a LOT of creative energy into actually presenting us with the article. Speaking frankly though, it was a little difficult to read.
With that, here's a little constructive criticism: Take some extra time to proof-read your article before hitting the "POST" button. If English is not your mother-language, maybe think about having someone else proof-read it and offer you their feedback.
Well-articulated grammar will go a long way in guiding your reader more easily through your thought process. I've upvoted and followed you because I really like your ideas and creativity. Peace!
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