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Here my 1st entry for the #comedyopenmic I hope you like the theme and be of your liking humorists.
A simple story that has much to say more than a comedy is a reflection for youth today
We all sympathize with wanting to grow and learn or act like older people, boys and girls who are by nature only rebellious, capricious, mediocre, and we measure the consequences of our actions because we still have innocent and helpless minds.
A girl who imagined her perfect world, She wanted to grow up and be of legal age watching teenagers doing pranks and games, She was angry not to belong to that circle of that stage.
You belonged to a family of upper middle class, his parents seized impressible values so that he could obtain an excellent education
Spend the time that girl called "sofia" has come of age
I was just thinking about doing what she wanted and well that was it
He began to leave the weekend and did not study his grades were too low
He started a relationship with a boy who said he loved her and loved her forever
"Sofia" excited love only thought about a supeuto love that gave warmth and felt comfortable with herself
One night her parents called her attention for having bad behavior and that from one day to the next she was a completely different person. They gave them advice for their good and forbade her to fear a relationship
"Sofia" reacted in an aggressive and helpless way by raising her voice to the most sacred people who were her parents, immediately her parents triggered a slap in the face for disrespect
She only looked at them in the eyes with tears of courage and inpulso and without thinking it I wish the death to both of them and it ran to the street without having any destiny
He called "Luis" her boyfriend to pick her up where they always were
Half an hour later "Luis" arrives, all drunk to the place
"Sofia"
Where were you and why are you in that state?
'Luis'
R = I was with some friends, tell me what's wrong with you crying?
"Sofia"
Discuss with my parents I need you to get me out of here please
'Luis'
R = Ok princess come Put on your helmet and get on
2 hours later they call the parents of sofia giving them the terrible news that their daughter still suffered a terrible accident and was torn between life and death and the boy still died 1 hour before the accident
Nomino: @Andreamaestre1 and
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