The story itself is kind of good.But you seriously need to work on your grammar.
Another tip is that you can read more creepypasta's that are more popular and get the touch how to write them and build them up to the point it excites people.
The story itself is kind of good.But you seriously need to work on your grammar.
Another tip is that you can read more creepypasta's that are more popular and get the touch how to write them and build them up to the point it excites people.
RE: CREEPYPASTA Mr.Loop