Caitlyn, I love most of your writing. You are speaking the truth about power and money in the developed world, and I have been sharing your insights widely among my friends and acquaintences. It's essential that as many people as possible read your words, think about them, and then hopefully translate that into action.

Which is why I'm writing to say, please stop peppering your sentences with "fucking" (or whatever term you think evokes hipness and edginess). It's annoying and adolescent, and therefore it gets in the way of your VERY IMPORTANT message. Join the table of writers and political analysts that is set aside for the grownups. You have something that we all desperately need to hear and think about. Don't undermine it with faux edgy literary indulgences.