I don't like this logo, look like old school 90s design..
Suggestions:
- Use more simple and actual typography
- Don't put too much text shadow
- Be more clear on the message and put the title in the middle and in big
- Change the colors
- Look at some tutorial on youtube about logo design
- Take inspiration from actual logo
RE: First draft for the logo of my series / Erster Logo-Entwurf für meine Serie