That would be totally awesome Hive account@irisworld! How old is your niece?
One young lady said it was "smooth," which is totally cool, and may be awesome for a young audience! On your mention of reading to your niece, it reminds me maybe I should send it to my daughter to spread to all the grandkids and my great grand daughter who is 4!
I actually have another short story of something that happened to me at work if you want to read it to her, it's called "The Creek."
@jamerussell/the-creek