I am a big fan of your pursuit to create an alternative to steemit.com but I am going to be brutally honest about my impression of this video so that it may help with your crowdfunding.

1. You didn't grab me within the first 5-10 seconds. A simple question would do the trick. Something like: "What if we could re-invent social media?" Your goal is to get people curious about your offer as early as possible in the video.

2. It took almost a minute for you to get to your unique selling proposition. That's way way way too long.

3. Work on your copy, take a Udemy course if you need to, because it sucks. (the video and the music is pretty good though").