Nicely told and I'll return to read the next one
A pity you did not include a link for us to read the 1st part. If you do not know how to do so, let me know.
Also, your tags, I'm sorry to say, are stupid.
Why didn't you use 'fiction' and 'writing' - who do you think will go to 'more /expect' to look for stories?
RE: The thunder child