I like where you are going with this. It has an interesting setting and good start to the novel. It's easy to read and flows through the writing, all good things.
I would like to see it filled out more. Longer chapters with more detail and more action. For me this makes for a good outline to a story but still needs to be filled out around that.
Keep going with it anyway as you have the talent for writing anyway.
RE: "The Frost Field" novel. Opening chapters.