This part was as intersting as the previous, thanks.
I would want to point out some grammatical errors:-
- It's been six months and he couldn't ->make<- any significant progress.
- reutine->routine
3.Saiki Wakanabe->Saiki Watanabe
4.now part of the family now->now part of the family.
RE: Sci-fi Novel: The Ultimate Debate - Part 2: Sun Moi's Test With Ogox