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2017-12-15 19:57

If this was supposed to introduce Francis then this felt forced
I do not understand what kind of world this
If the story is going for a realistic one then a knight or any skilled fighter would not take unnecessary risks
If it is going for a fantasy then i do not see nothing to suggest it
Francis is a greedy chivalrous knight not interesting as a character

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