Yeah, I totally understand where is coming from, but I get why it's like that. It was sort of an impulsive thing, an almost seamless transition between stabbing the ice repeatedly and going at the man whose heart had gone cold as ice. I could almost feel the heat on my cheeks from all that stabbing.
As always, I really liked it. There's something about your writing, , that really makes me feel immersed. It's exciting and feels a bit as if my heart was replaced by your character's. I don't really know what it is you do so right, but keep on doing it!
RE: A Stabbing in New York