[Fiftywords] "Pursue That Car!" (Micro fiction.)

Hi all fiftyworders! I really liked the "Fun Stuff" part of this week's post of Hive account@jayna's #fiftywords challenge. The prompt this week is "Chase." This prompt makes me think of old movies with a lot of cars chasing each other. Also Mafia for some reason.

While I was preparing to sleep this idea hit me. So here we go again, another #fiftywords story I hope you like!

"Pursue That Car!"

He overpaid me with a smirk. He Thanked me while keeping his gun away from my sight. I believe it's empty now, anyway.

We bid each other farewell.

Relieved, I returned home.
My wife might object, but I love the thrill of being the Taxi guy of Mafia Town.

The End

So how it was? I wanted to have a story with conflict and resolution but the only thing I managed to do is hinting at that conflict and going straight to resolution. This story feels like it deserves a second part but hey, that's my week's entry!

[Fiftywords] "Pursue That Car!" (Micro fiction.)

"Pursue That Car!"

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