Hi all fiftyworders! I really liked the "Fun Stuff" part of this week's post of 's #fiftywords challenge. The prompt this week is "Chase." This prompt makes me think of old movies with a lot of cars chasing each other. Also Mafia for some reason.
While I was preparing to sleep this idea hit me. So here we go again, another #fiftywords story I hope you like!
"Pursue That Car!"
He overpaid me with a smirk. He Thanked me while keeping his gun away from my sight. I believe it's empty now, anyway.
We bid each other farewell.
Relieved, I returned home.
My wife might object, but I love the thrill of being the Taxi guy of Mafia Town.
The End
So how it was? I wanted to have a story with conflict and resolution but the only thing I managed to do is hinting at that conflict and going straight to resolution. This story feels like it deserves a second part but hey, that's my week's entry!