Hi Everyone! We've signed Nerio Bernardi to re-write a couple of scenes for 'Better Left Unsaid' I've attached a link following for two of those selected - scenes 33 and 35. I deleted scene 34 because it was not part of the same scene set-up as 33 and 35.
Once we have the rewrite, I'll share it with you to see if the re-write has improved the screenplay... or not. Keep in mind we are looking to develop character through dialogue AND to not be overly commercial - Moonlight compared to Fast and Furious as a bad example.
https://1drv.ms/b/s!AkUvccKPZGP5g_xKyXG388vo9ted4Q
