There's a lot of excellent character development here! One of the things I liked best about the prompt was the way sketches the different characters, and I thought you did a great job fleshing them out even further with additonal details. I also dig the courageous moment at the end where Crow declares her feelings for Francine and then, ever the professional, finishes the reading of the will. Nice! :D
RE: Finish the Story Contest - The Last Will and Testament of Geralda Connors