I'm back again for another entry into Finish the Story Contest held over in the 
WARNING: Please, if you don't like the beginning half, violence towards women, or strong horror in general, feel free to skip along to another post where fairytales rule the day because you won't find that here.
"Are you sure you want to go through with this?" Mike asked. He glanced over his shoulder, ensuring that Derek was still in the bathroom. "I mean. He's your uncle. That doesn't bother you?"
"You don't know him like I do.” Terry sipped his beer. Budweiser, working class. He snubbed his cigarette out and lit another. “He deserves it.”
“That’s not up for question.” Mike shrugged. “What I mean is, it’s heavy, is all. Taking life. It’s not a simple thing. You don’t know. Cause you’ve never done it. So don’t be doing this deal just because Derek wants you to.”
“Don’t question me.” Terry eyed Mike, his face tensing up, his pupils dilated. Guys on meth, Mike noted.
Derek returned from the bathroom, cigarette dangling from his grinning mouth. He stretched his arms out to Mike and Terry, the gristle on his chin showing. “Boys,” he said. “Let’s get over this plan a final time, then, eh fuckers?”
Derek walked over to his bar and brought back three more beers. The empty bar, Jerry’s, had been his fathers, who, incidentally, was also not named Jerry. “Terry, what are you going to do?”
Terry sipped his beer and began. “I’m going to come along on his fishing trip that he takes every Sunday. I’ll communicate it to him in person. I’ll tag along up to his favorite fishing trip at Red Top State Park. I’ll get him nice and drunk so I drive back.”
Derek turned to Mike. “And you?”
“I’ll be ready and waiting at the gas station of the 4-1-1. I put a gun to their head and demand cash. Terry says there’s cash back at his Uncle John’s place, not far off. And, if he’s right, there is, buried in the backyard. The house is off the main road, far from neighbors, so it’ll just be the two of us."
“And I’ll be following y’all there.” Derek nodded. “We get the cash, kill the old man and make it all look like an accident.” Derek leaned in close to them. Mike could smell the cheap bourbon and cigarettes on his breath. “Now, not one of you is going to fuck this up, because I’m not going back to prison. So I’m going to make this crystal-fucking-clear for y’all. You do it all like I say. Exactly like I say, and there’s no trouble. Understand? No trouble aside from you having the problem of which hooker you want stick your Mr. Franklin into for the evenin’, undestand?”
Derek extended his hand to Mike. Mike shook it, looking him firm in the eyes. This was Derek’s ritual before a job. He’d seen it all before.
Terry was next. He took Derek’s hand. But Derek didn’t let go.
“You lying to me about your Uncle Jon burying his loot in the back yard? About what he did to you? You lying to me now, boy?”
Terry stared Derek in the eyes. “I’m not. So promise me that I get to be the one to do it.”
MY ENDING
Terry, Mike, and Derek wrapped to chairs by duct tape awoke when the smelling salt entered their noses.
"Welcome back, boys. Don't scream! Just fooling. How could you with a gag in your mouth and duct-tape to hold it in. Let me ask right off the bat as I sharpen this here dull knife your stupid fuckin' friend stuck me with. You didn't expect that one, did you? No, no one ever expects the little, weak, frail old man to have a gas room and the strength to back it up. Listen, youngin's, I've been pickin' up two-ton hay bails since your momma started bleedin' down her legs and gassin' things three times as long as you've been alive and drinkin' since I left the womb. - shrink-shrink I love that sound. - Let me take you back through the past sixty-years, fellas, because no matter what you do to rid yourself of it, it keeps comin' to find you. I've learned that once a man kills another man his life is no longer his, they ... haunt you. Were you ready for that, Terry? I mean - really ready? No, I say you never had the balls, you piss-ant-little-twirp. Do you know how many bodies I've burned over the years so that I could afford my lavish lifestyle, this piece of heaven I've carved out for myself? No, you don't. That is a secret I've kept from you. I was goin' to let you live out your miserable existence because I promised one god damn female and here the fuck it is to bite me in the ASS. I'm never trustin' that voice again. Fuckin' bitch won't shut her trap. I'll find a way. Back to you. You just had to come back here, didn't you? It's not your fault your so ... - shrink-shrink - stupid, after all, you were born from a heifer, a waste of a livin' body that the worms won't even touch. That is what produced you, magot. Why did you have to come back? You were out. Oh, I know what it's about. You want some of the treasure you overheard me speaking about, don't you? Took you long enough to fall into my trap. I would have pulled this gag sooner but that god damn whore... Tryin' to scratch that crystal itch, eh? You sure are a gullible little fuck. Please, allow me to show you my treasure, my precious savin's that I've culminated over the years. I've taken the liberty of diggin' it up for you, this precious box that holds my precious ... souvenirs. Yes, that's right, cunt. My souvenirs - shut the fuck up, woman. Stay outta my god damn head! - shrink-shrink"
A frying pan came flying through the dim lighting, cracking Jerry's head open like a watermelon. He died instantly.
A woman hysterically screamed, "SHUT UP! SHUT UP! NO MORE! MO MORE!"
A door slammed.
Loud hysterical sobbing trailed off into the wheat fields.
Hours later after getting free, Terry, with Mike and Derek behind him, opened the box his uncle prized. There were various shapes and sizes, various colors and hues of --- teeth. Nothing but teeth.
THE END
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