Love is the most magical thing you can ever experience, until it is based on an illusion ;)

This is absolute quality. However, you need to work on your Markdown techniques and include some pictures too. In that way, readers can visualize more on your post. It cannot be denied that the quality is at its finest, but it should be partnered with creativeness. As what I've seen above, the post looks boring because of pure text.

Hope my 22 cents helped :).