Not bad, but you picked the WRONG tags, maybe that's why nobody saw this. You wrote gameing as a tag instead of gaming or game, that's a big mistake because no one could see this post.
On the other hand, as said... you should consider joining gaming communities like archdruid or OPgaming, you can find a very long list of communities here:
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/e/2PACX-1vRXT9Qbek1sKv2I1BuPcFEt50_YWE1kPL-eJKSaijX7ij5VJhJpJTVdyr-MyuMY1VpJgorcQSCcjQ33/pubhtml
To finish my suggestions on improvement: give some personal feelings into your post next time, it was like I was reading the news directly from the page and not from a fellow gamer. I stopped playing AC after black Flag and it just keeps getting worse IMHO, instead of getting better it seems to be becoming more and more weirder.
RE: Assassin's Creed Odyssey