Your corrections are highly valuable and I take no offense to them. I'll be commenting below as I include them. This is for my own records and to show what was actioned.

Suggest avoiding the negative connotation of fraction, by using 'distributing some...' or 'a portion'.

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... or 'without financial investment...' I find the first far preferable personally.

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Should be 'its'.

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Also, there are exceptions to the integrity of the blockchain, and it is meet to disclose them early. The appearance of presenting biased information should be avoided to the degree possible.

"Integrity" refers to the state of the non-alterable data and finality. Can you please expand on what you mean by your statement?

Myriad was used in the previous section. I suggest 'many' or 'several' here, as Myriad has more impact in it's prior use.

Good catch, changed to "many" as per your suggestion. ✓

I suggest 'extraordinary opportunities". It has more impact IMHO, and nothing is unlimited.

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Extraordinary is not a good fit as then what is ordinary?

Disproportionate suffices IMHO.

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Associated.

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'...of the account, displayed as mana.'

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Hence is unnecessary, extraneous, and will likely reduce comprehension.

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'...may still issue limited transactions that vary...'

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'but no longer counts towards...'

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Ownership of the stake is retained by the delegator.

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'DPoS theory' or 'Proof of Stake theory' does not also mean Piece of Shit theory.

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'except those that'

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