Hello men, happy new year, that was a good composition but I wanted to give you some advices to consider for your future entries.

Consider having a back track in the performance that improves a little

You shouldn't forget to make a promotional video because that helps vibes and also to get more votes

Brother, consider using more optimal vocal techniques, for example, support with the diaphragm, chest or head voice and breathing because that helps your voice not present any insecurity when singing.

A hug and many blessings