I have noticed that you and a few others who participate in the competition who are still developing their musical skills, tend to over-explain and dress up their performances with beautiful words of describing it themselves of how you see it, and how you wish it to be received, however,

although your writing appears poetic, creative and thoughtful, I suspect you are using AI prompts to help you over describe your performance and I do not support or encourage this, nor is it acceptable on the Hive Blockchain, if this continues, I will greatly reduce curation or not accept your entries. The context of your writing is nonsensical at times and sometimes clearly exaggerated

the musical presentation and performance itself leaves much to be desired...

Please keep practicing your singing, I would suggest you to add an instrumental to your video, and perform with more passion, extending and holding those notes out, and committing yourself to the music more intently, the beginning of your performance was weaker and you clearly held back, but from around the 39 second mark in the video, you started to open up more, but you are still holding back, I know you can do more and you actually have a decent voice at current skill level, I enjoyed the display of your vibrato, you have a nice tone. I was still awaiting that great display of a powerful exultation.. and for you to get louder. I hope to see it next time.

Psalms 33:3 KJV

"Sing unto Him a new song, play skillfully and with a loud noise."

In short, as we praise Him, we are to show skillfulness and be bold with our sound, but still careful and controlled.

Please make your performances at least 2 or more minutes longer.

I pray you consider my advice, as it is to help you.