Hey Hive account@vocal.journey1 aka Uyi,
Really nice to see you putting out your original music, this is exciting stuff to witness as a fellow original artist, I am happy to see more original songs be shared from our Vibes Community. This was a good song, I liked the lyrical content, the message, the direction, there are some transitions that could be smoothened out more with spacing and breath control structuring with the lines so it doesn't feel rushed between verse, chorus/bridge, but I like the overall flow, energy and melodic switch ups, the verses helped to build that momentum. My only main complaint is that this was not a live performance, and I wish for the future you go back to showcasing your live vocal performances, what you are so well known for. Thanks for sharing this one with us, it was great to hear. It will inspire others, especially to showcase their originals too.