Loved this poetic and gritty approach to this song bro, this was dope, can't wait to hear the full track, this one is thought provoking and reflective and deep. You wrote this one well and flowed it with ease. Keep consistent in posting, just a little advice, try not to post non-music competition entries using the Vibes tag, you might receive more support that way, because it makes it seem like you are entering twice, but was probably an overlook, it can happen. Trying using the tag Music instead. But this track is it. Thanks for sharing