Hive account@shunzee001

The beginning of your entry started off strong
But the loud backing track music ended up overpowering your vocals
Try turning it down and balancing it out next time
I like the creativity and originality you put into your own lyrics
And how you delivered it so coolly with style
The chorus, I felt could have been sang much stronger to match the energy you showed on the verses
and the energy of the music
My main suggestion and critique for you would be to perform it all live next time in future entries
You have some good potential to make some fun and great music
You can prerecord minor adlibs or so
But it's always better to perform live and do it in one take
It is possible and you can definitely do it
Keep practicing, sharing and performing
And continue having fun!

I would like to see you keep improving

Check out this guide I wrote to help you improve your future entries

@verbal-d/official-cut-off-time-post-for-vibes-week-14-entries-cest-10-am-june-29th-2024-this-post-includes-entry-guidlines-for-new

-@Verbal-D: Gospel Musician/Rapper/Singer/Songwriter & Official Vibes Judge