Nice cover song choice this week, your singing showed some effort, keep practicing it and smoothen out that delivery and breath control.

Try adjusting the microphone a bit away from your mouth so that when you do actually breathe and exhale, the feedback and distorted sound is not picked up from the air you hit the microphone with, the microphone is quite sensitive and picks up your consonants very easily, please be careful with that because it disrupts the listening experience. Hope that helps you for future entries.