I was captivated by this, if something is happening to you personally, you have expressed it very well, and you feel everything you say, what if it is that with time we discover the truth, we never know the consequences, as soon as there is a cause.

Technically your writing impressed me, it would be good to fix the source of the image, since that is the address in google, the source you get it from the page where the image is hosted, it usually comes out in the option "visit" or "visit page", or even says the name of the page at the bottom of the image when you select it in Google.

Source: https://rotoplascentroamerica.com/como-aprovechar-el-agua-de-lluvia/

Good job, very heartfelt lines and remember that adding more images makes your writing even more dramatic, it gives more body to your post.