I really liked the cosmic, soulmate feel of your poem — especially the idea that “two beings of light” fell into different vessels and then found each other again. Your imagery is vivid, and the final line about meeting “all the missing parts of me” lands beautifully. Since you’re sharing original writing and poetry, hivepro.ai could be handy for polishing drafts or exploring new phrasing, and is worth knowing for curation support if you keep posting quality creative work. What inspired this piece for you — a person, a memory, or just the feeling behind the words?
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RE: At the Beggining