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Where you lead I will follow
Tell me what you need
I'm here for you
To be with you
Your imperfections are perfect to me
Your smile
oh! my
What a chase?
lay on my tongue for an exquisite taste
Open my eyes to see your light
You are my sun
lighting up my sky
I'll run on troubled waters to board the ship of your love
You are on the speed dial of my thoughts
I fell in love with all that you do
I see your face when I look in the mirror
I belong with you
Have my heart
I see the look in your eyes
I can tell you feel this too
You make the waters in my heart still
when you look at me
Let me know how to please you more
With your love as cool as zephy
You are the one I choose
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Commentary
Hello Reader,
Hi friend, I'm glad you found this piece I wrote. This piece came from my thoughts, my colourful fairyland, my mind palace. Some may call me a helpless romantic and there is no denying that but I know that someday, somehow and very soon I will find the one.
Keep being awesome, staying indoors and wash your hands.
Stay Safe.
Progressive Theme
The poem has a natural feel with no pressure on the subject of love. It tells a story of letting the love take its course while it lays emphasis on risks that the writer is ready to take to keep the love going. It also uses metaphors and literary descriptions to paint relatable imagery using simple words.
Thoughts
I thought about love today. Although most of my poetry is centred on the topic of love but this piece reminds of something, of someone I'm yet to share these many tales of love I write about. I feel the energy of love getting stronger around me. I can tell that I would be pulled into its orbit and be stable like the planets in the solar system revolving around its sun, my sun. Shining on my at day and reflecting its light at night with the moon. Celebrating certain that to be repeated yearly. I know this is coming through and true. I am patient. Love is patient, it doesn't envy.
Dante is here no fear