The Participants
# 1
The freewrite that I liked the most is the one from
with the "she hid her bruises" prompt. In the brevity of its lyrics she expresses a complete story about a very common theme, but narrated with grace and suspense. It even leaves the end of the story open to interpretation, as I already expressed in the comments I made, because freedom can be won in two ways here, it all depends on who is having tea and what kind of tea it was. So I invite you to read again her post and reflect on it.
# 2
My favorite freewrite for the day happens to be one written by
@iamjadeline/she-hid-the-bruises-freewrite.
This short yet vivid write-up features a woman who's probably been abused a lot by her husband and in a bid to end the pain and sorrow she's had to go through decided to end the source. The first scene captures her going to get some materials for a supposed disposal. She left her son asleep at home and tries so hard to hide the reality of what's actually happened from him. Confused as to why daddy's not moving, curiosity sets in and the child begins to ask questions.
# 3
I came across a particular freewrite from
. He wrote a piece with the prompt word - 'Delivery' and he delivered on it.
What I like about the freewrite firstly is the cover art which makes a reader want to find out what content one would create with such a painting. I called it an exceptional freewrite because it was finely crafted to keep the reader in progressive suspense while using the most expressive words.
Reading the freewrite made me feel like I was present in the scene, of course in a fictional world where I tangle with my lover to create a world of our own.
Man is this one ever good! He has supplied us with two (freewrite?) paintings (are they paintings?) that are spectacularly mysterious, and has accompanied them with a freewriten mystical journey into the nature of words under a hat.
(My entry is disqualified as I am a sponsor)
Thank you to everyone who participated this week! I hope you will all join us next week, and bring your friends
The Winner
The winner was picked by a random draw tool.
Congratulations to
# 3
You won 3 HBI units from the Freewrite House.
A huge THANK YOU to 
and
They are going to pick their favorite entry and sponsor that person to additional HBI. Look in the comments for their choice.
