yes, i enjoy the double meaning plus the standard poetic license with metre.

Consider:
Will (yours or mine) was
or
Will it (was it) (note alliteration)

Some imagery there too -- like as a kid we went to winchester mystery house - yea that family - and they had a sink with 13 holes -- so the haiku can be about death (read 4) or the paranoia of building to avoid death, as mrs. Winchester did (or did she)

So, you. See? (By the rockets red glare) haikus can magnifisize how you think

ya think?