It looks beautiful but it's a pity that you only used one of your own photos. Since you have been there, it would have been good to see it from your own eyes and not other people's. Also, it felt like reading an online advert, and not a travel post from someone who has been there and sharing their personal experience.

Hopefully you will take on these tips as it will help you to make your travel content stand out and hopefully get more support in future.