Sorry because my writing does not align with your high teacher standards. I am an amateur writer, and English is not my native language. But I try to do it as good as I can.
Even worse is redundant information, I got to be a teacher for a while, it was very frustrating that I had to be the one to teach redundant information to students, I had to leave the job because I couldn’t cope.
I am very aware of this. My girlfriend is a teacher, too. She found it very hard to face this similar problematic
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