Hello Hive account@kelvinpeters,
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There are serious issues with this piece that do not allow us to curate it. Your image source is not right. We need a copyright free image, from a recognized site. We do not accept chapters or to be continued stories. We are a short story and creative nonfiction community. This seems to be a play.

We look forward to reading posts from you that follow our community rules. Thank you.