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Disco balls and dance floors
Sway of a ballerina-like a swan
illusions of the future
your spectrum ease out your beauty
Like the fall of olympus
I found myself falling
crashing and rolling over for you
desires of wants
I see in your eyes
The way you move
Is like a memory
Is like a movie without sound
Oh what an indescribable and unbelievable view
The last time I saw you
was a mirage in my dream
take me back
I'm dying to see a glimpse of you
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Commentary
Hello Reader,
I thought to bless your eyes with this ink and piece of poetry. I hope you are doing well. Sending you love and light. Keep being awesome.
Stay Safe.
Progressive Theme
This poetry is dreamy. A fantasy or an illusion. it can be anything you want it to be or a feeling. If you were to describe the last time you saw someone that got you enchanted or the last time you saw your lover. Ask yourself, how would I paint the picture. This piece helps you to accomplish that as it starts with a memory that is familiar while describing physical actions and a feeling the follows into the mix. Telling all the unsaid words in short phrases and using a simple expression that is easy to understand.
Could this last time by real or imaginative? you tell me.
Thoughts
When I saw the writing prompt for a weekly poetry contest I thought I could take up this challenge. Probably write something different than my usual but Nah. I did the thing, the mellexy thing. And to be honest I feel this poetry. it feels good.
p.s I tapped from a beautiful memory of someone I will like to see again but its been so long that memories are becoming fdreamy
Dante is here no fear
Lanre Sonde