Having read both the story and the comments about changes that you had to make -- well done, given that this was not the ending that you originally had in mind. Good save, and the story still works!
Having read both the story and the comments about changes that you had to make -- well done, given that this was not the ending that you originally had in mind. Good save, and the story still works!
RE: The Ink Well Prompt #16: Your Birthday | An unforgettable day